Website Revisions – 6 Feb
Overall
Overall – there is a lot of white space that also comes up on mobile and laptop.
Can we please reduce some of this? Thank you!
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SEO – can we please pepper some more relevant SEO type words around the site – assuming location is key to add at least? We say family law a lot already … 😊 Lemme know if you need me to draft anything here.
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Can we change all 18 years to 19 years throughout the website please?
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Can we please check the consistency in font size between pages? Some pages have 13 as the body font, and some 15 (eg Values)– same with sub headers.
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Can we please throw in some more stock images to dilute andy and make it a bit more personable?
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Footer
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Can we possibly link the services at the bottom of the boiler plate / footer to the services page?
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Copyright – change to Foritsen Legal Law Practice – remove the PTY LTD
HOME PAGE
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TOUCH UP PHOTO – smooth it out please – he would really like it less “in your face” lol
Here is the before and after. I have also repositionedit to be way less zoomed in.
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Homepage
Can we please zoom out a bit, and maybe soften the photo a little? We have looked at it on all devices – laptop it’s very extreme / super close up – you can see all the details in his face. I know Andy would like you to take 10 years off … please and thank you.
In essence, he’d like a makeover please – zoom it out – teeth whiter, less nasal hair, less wrinkles, fade the five o’clock shadow, deal with his ear hair … please and thank you!
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Can we add new bracketed info to help with SEO after Fortisen Legal Law Practice (servicing Southeast Queensland)
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I ended this a little abruptly. Lol. Can you please delete the last line – I CAN HELP YOU FIND CALM IN THE CHAOS, and add a new last para as follows?
“You are not alone. I can help you find calm in the chaos. I look forward to speaking with you soon. “
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Change header from I CAN ASSIST to I CAN HELP
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Change: I need guidance with a frightening domestic violence situation to “I need to navigate a frightening domestic violence situation”
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This sub header needs “ WITH …” added please:
With 18 years’ legal experience across many areas of the law, including family law and divorce law, I can provide advice and support with …
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Pics that run with the services – can we please change the DV one a man talking to a man?? And also change on the services page.
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Can we swap the pic from the MEET ANDY page with the one on the far right, keep the Brisbane pic, and add a stock image in place of the left pic please?
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Testimonials
Can we have the same font for each whole testimonial please? Maybe just one para?
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Also – one needs to be changed from SUSAN to Mike – we have two Susans. Think it’s the third one.
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Testimonial 4 – remove end quote marks at the end of the first para
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My Approach
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Can we please start each step with Step 1, Step 2 etc? So it reads like a sentence?
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About Us
Change from ABOUT US to ABOUT (as there is no us!?)
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The Fortisen Legal Difference
I don’t really have a para for where you have the Latin, so you may need to move the pic somewhere else – sorry.
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First two paras don’t have any bolded keywords in them – can you please bold a few? Ta!
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My Values
Replace photo to the one below from the original shoot list please
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Font size is 15 – should it be 13 to be consistent?
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Font size is 15 – should it be 13 to be consistent?
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Can we please align dotpoints with first line of copy?
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Services
Change OUR SERVICES to SERVICES for main page header
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What we do – change to how I can help
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Change The table below to THE LIST BELOW (it’s not longer in a table so I need to change the word – thanks)15 – should it be 13 to be consistent?
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Change: I need guidance with a frightening domestic violence situation to “I need to navigate a frightening domestic violence situation”
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Can we please add a colon after This could include:
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My Approach
Same changes as home page – adding Step 1, Step 2 etc back into the start of each of the step paragraphs so they make sense
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Resources
Delete blog and glossary pages
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Contact Us
Change copy to:
“Fill in the form below to schedule a confidential initial phone consultation or please call or email your information.
(delete OR FAX)”
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In the BOX field – we need to change the O to either AND or OR
